"The Yawn Patrol" by WVH

Augie De Blieck Jr. adebliec at internexus.net
Tue Oct 10 02:57:57 CET 1995


DAVID:

I didn't like this story at all.  As you mentioned, the art looked 
rushed.  Heck, it looked sloppy in some places.  (It hurts my eyes to 
look at the very first panel.  ::shiver::)

My other bone of contention comes with the story itself.  WVH has already 
done a much better sleep-related story back in the Disney run.  Yes, it 
wasn't the typical format of 6 panels per page or so, but it was an 
enjoyable tale with something different to offer.  "Yawn Patrol" had neither.

-Augie
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