"The Yawn Patrol" by WVH
Augie De Blieck Jr.
adebliec at internexus.net
Tue Oct 10 02:57:57 CET 1995
DAVID:
I didn't like this story at all. As you mentioned, the art looked
rushed. Heck, it looked sloppy in some places. (It hurts my eyes to
look at the very first panel. ::shiver::)
My other bone of contention comes with the story itself. WVH has already
done a much better sleep-related story back in the Disney run. Yes, it
wasn't the typical format of 6 panels per page or so, but it was an
enjoyable tale with something different to offer. "Yawn Patrol" had neither.
-Augie
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