Hiawatha rhythm
Donald D. Markstein
ddmarkstein at cox.net
Wed Jul 5 17:57:35 CEST 2006
I'll admit, looking at it, the first paragraph of my last message did
transpose a non-accented syllable from the end to the beginning, but it
still looks to me like it scans pretty well. Oh well, it's not important
if you don't see it the way I do. (By the way, about 30 years ago, I
wrote a whole page in a fanzine that way. It ended with the sentence "I
could write like this forever, but I think I'll rest my mind and purge
from it this noisome rhythm, purge from it this metered nuisance, that
will not allow me peace to read, write, talk or think without it."
Nobody caught a syllable out of place. Doesn't mean there necessarily
wasn't one, however.)
Elaine, thanks VERY much for the nice words about my work. You may be
interested that I've written a sequel to "King of the Bungaloos", the
plot of which is hinted at on the last page. David Gerstein assures me
it's on Gemstone's schedule, so you'll be seeing it soon (if you haven't
already). It's a little study on how different characters respond to the
same basic situation.
And speaking of David, he may be the guy who really did that Gilbert &
Sullivan story you like, but I've done them too. My big one wasn't
published, however, for reasons explained on the Web page where the
unfinished script was posted
(http://math.boisestate.edu/GaS/parodies/html/pinfeather.html).
Quack, Don
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